Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

Nowadays, the concept of
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from
home
has outraged everywhere , after the pandemic in
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. Everything in
this
world has pros and cons , so the advantages and some of
disadvantages
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are explained with examples, in the following paragraphs. The concept of
work
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from
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home
includes that a
person
works from his/her device like
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computer
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a computer
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,
laptops
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laptop
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,etc and submits his/her
work
to the office online. So
this
concept has many advantages like a
person
working from
home
can save money, because , his/her travelling cost is reduced, and so much time is saved by not going to the office, and meanwhile
this
free time a
person
can do other things
also
, like the
person
could
work
on his/her body , and he/she could do business
also
while
doing job. If a
person
is travelling
than
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also
he/she can
work
and make money. With advantages there are disadvantages
also
, like when a
person
stayes
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stays
stayed
at
home
everyday
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and works from his/her house only, the
person
gets
frustated
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frustrated
and he/she starts hating the job.
Other
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main problem is that the
person
working from
home
needs good quality and
high speed
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internet connection in his/her house, which is quite costly. The main
conern
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concern
is of
health
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the health
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of the
person
working from
home
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because the
person
has to sit
whole
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day at one place and
work
, which is not at all healthy, for human beings as it
diturbs
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disturbs
posture. There is more distraction at
home
also
, so sometimes it is hard for people to
work
from
home
.
To sum up
, we can say that there are mixed
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of
views
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for
advanatages
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advantages
and disadvantages, so a
person
should balance both, and
work
efficiently, and should be more dedicated to the
work
, so
lastly
he/she can
work
however
they are comfortable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advantages
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
  • drawbacks
  • flexibility
  • work schedule
  • elimination
  • commute
  • increased productivity
  • improved
  • work-life balance
  • cost savings
  • potential
  • distractions
  • social isolation
  • separating
  • supervision
  • limited
  • opportunities
  • career growth
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