Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

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Dear Thomas, I am writing a letter to discuss about parking issue with all of the

peoples

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who are living in my area. when I moved

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this

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to this

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town

then

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am facing

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this

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problem for one month.

Beside

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this

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, I was

thing

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thinking

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to leave

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of leaving

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this

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house but suddenly

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have a good idea to tell you

the

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about the

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issue of parking space. The cars are not being parked appropriately so the space area

are

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shrikned

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enshrined

. Regularly, I have no place to park my vehicle so I have to

parked

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park

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on the

road side

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roadside

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Although

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the

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apply

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motor vehicles are being placed in the street and blocked the road for other

s cars

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scars

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. I think we have to solve

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problem all together. I am giving you recommendations to tackle

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issue. Everyone should park their cars in a proper way so

others

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people can park their vehicles easily. Another way to fix

this

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we can make a rule to pay a small fine

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for

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for

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wrong parking. I am planning to discuss

this

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trouble

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a meeting with all neighbours and make possible solutions. I am looking forward to hearing you back. Yours Sincerely,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

191 words

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Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not resposilbe to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

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