Nowadays more and more people are using smartphones and computers to communicate, so they are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instantaneous
  • Over-reliance
  • Digital communication
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Body language
  • Verbal communication
  • Social isolation
  • Physical social interactions
  • Sense of loneliness
  • Professional relationships
  • Personal relationships
  • Emotional connections
  • Networking
  • Building rapport
  • Counter-argument
  • Balanced communication
  • Enhanced social bonds
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