The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The first
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graph
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compares the percentage of families who have electrical appliances in a period of 100 years in a country, and the second
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graph
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depicts the
amount
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of time spent on housework per week in the same period.
It is clear that
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the
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of people who have bought vacuum cleaners and refrigerators has risen significantly between 1920 and 2019.
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, We can
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see that the number of hours spent on household tasks has dropped dramatically.
According to
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the first
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, in 1920 the number of washing machine
owners
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was the highest, with a percentage of 40%,
while
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the same figures for ref
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was a negligible
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. But in 1942, the popularity of ref increased and the proportion of fridge
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overtook their counterparts and reached a peak of 100% in 1980.
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, by 2000, vacuum cleaners had
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gained high popularity and the rate of both fridge and vacuum
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was 100% between 2000 and 2019. Looking at the second
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graph
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, we can see that 50 hours a week were spent on house chores in 1920.
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these activities lost their attraction with the passage of time, and there was a drop in the
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of time spent on house chores which reached 10 hours a week in 2019
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, graph, amount, owners with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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