The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first
line
graph
compares the percentage of families who have electrical appliances in a period of 100 years in a country, and the second
line
graph
depicts the
amount
of time spent on housework per week in the same period.
It is clear that
the
amount
of people who have bought vacuum cleaners and refrigerators has risen significantly between 1920 and 2019.
Furthermore
, We can
also
see that the number of hours spent on household tasks has dropped dramatically.
According to
the first
line
graph
, in 1920 the number of washing machine
owners
was the highest, with a percentage of 40%,
while
the same figures for ref
owners
was a negligible
amount
. But in 1942, the popularity of ref increased and the proportion of fridge
owners
overtook their counterparts and reached a peak of 100% in 1980.
Moreover
, by 2000, vacuum cleaners had
also
gained high popularity and the rate of both fridge and vacuum
owners
was 100% between 2000 and 2019. Looking at the second
line
graph
, we can see that 50 hours a week were spent on house chores in 1920.
However
these activities lost their attraction with the passage of time, and there was a drop in the
amount
of time spent on house chores which reached 10 hours a week in 2019
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