Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person

Dear Sir , I am writing
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letter to appreciate the efforts of the prestigious local newspaper through which you have decided to reward the individuals who are indulged in the social welfare work . I would like to recommend a person who is running
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Unicef for the destitute public . Her name is Sweta Sharma and she is 50 years old retired teacher , living at 54 Hespler Road Cambridge. At
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age, she is living a simple life and earned people's respect from her commendable job. She is the most deserving candidate because she has spent more than 80% of her income to provide the basic necessities to the impoverished individuals which includes food , clothes and education.
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, every year she
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a charity event and
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all the money to the schools
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, 80 students were able to finish their higher education . I would like to suggest that the local newspaper write an article which exhibits her qualities and good gestures and the public across the city will come forward to help her and appreciate her efforts. I hope you will like
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notion and I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you . Yours faithfully, Harvi

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coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your ideas a bit more clearly in separate paragraphs.
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Add a little more detail about the charity events she organizes.
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The letter expresses clear appreciation for the newspaper's effort.
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The writing has a good closing and greeting, showing respect.
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