The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.
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The diagram depicts the development of a small town in the period of
twenty eight
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twenty-eight
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years from .
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, the most notable changes include the replacement of the farmland and the forest
by
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with
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the
sport
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complex,
the
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and the
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demolishment of the fish market has made way for the new apartment complex. The northwest side of the map faced the least changes of all the sections, with the addition of a new road and more housing.
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Similarly
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the hotel situated
at
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in
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the southeast has
build
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a parking lot. Despite
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, other parts of the map have suffered bigger changes, starting with the northeast farmland and park being dug up and replaced with an
entretainment
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entertainment
area which includes
a tennis courts
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and a golfing complex, in the same way, the fish port was demolished to maintain the beach in, the shops and the fish market were demolished and replaced with restaurants and apartment complexes respectively.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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