41.The spread of multinational companies and the increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the growing

globalization

and the increase in the number of international

companies

are beneficial for everybody.

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essay agrees with

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statement

because

people

are able to have

products

of

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other countries and have

a

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better wealth. There are

products

that in some countries are difficult to get, and

the

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globalization

and worldwide business corporations allow

individuals

to obtain things more easily.

This

is because goods are shipped from one place to another

everyday

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from many

companies

.

Also

, as there are more international

companies

, the

competiviness

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competitiveness

rises, so they are forced to reduce the

price

of the goods, in

this

way, they will not be

elimianted

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eliminated

from the market.

For example

, decades before, Chinese

people

in Spain wanted to buy clothes from China, the prices were between 60€ to 100€,

where

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the original

price

was between 5€ to 10€, now there are many applications where

people

can buy Chinese

products

at

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lower

price

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prices

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. There are activities that only can be completed in certain countries,

this

allows

individuals

to visit, travel and know new places, cultures and

people

.

Also

, many

individuals

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of

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several reasons,

they

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cannot be in their own country,

then

, thanks to

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globalization

they are able to travel to other regions and stay there,

have

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a job and have a better

live

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life

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.

For instance

,

as a consequence

of wars, some

people

don’t have a place

where

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to live and they can’t stay in their country,

otherwise

, they are in danger of death, so their best option is to go to other places and try to start a new life. In conclusion, the growing

globalization

and the increasing number of multinational

companies

allowed a reduction of

price

in foreign

products

and a new life for certain

people

, I,

therefore

, believe that

globalization

and international organizations are

possitive

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positive

for all

individuals

.