You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features. You should write at least 150 words.
The given table delineates the information related to the number of adult men and women in cities and countryside who took part in four distinct leisure time activities which are reading, animated play, playing and photography, in 1990 and 2010. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that reading is the most preferable activity that individuals perform in their pass time.
In 1990, 61% of urban people preferred to read, Linking Words
however
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number increased for rural people, accounting for 71%. Only 10% of citizens prefer to do animated plays in urban societies, Linking Words
while
18% count for rural mankind. Playing performed by 21 %/and 26% by urban and rural persons respectively. Photography is the least performed activity by humans in cities and the countryside, Linking Words
that is
only 7% and 14% respectively.
In 2010, reading was mostly preferred and measured for about 78% of both sites. Linking Words
However
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is only 10% and 14% for animated plays in urban and rural respectively. The photography percentage increased by 10% for both cities and suburbs. Somehow, Linking Words
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percentage decreased for playing, accounting for 14%/and 26% for rural and urban humans.Linking Words
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