The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
The table illustrates percentage-wise data of around 7000 Scottish aged 16 to 74, for their participation in varying cultural activities
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as writing, visual arts and computer-based among others.
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, any performances including dancing, singing or acting were enjoyed across the age groups at an average of 22%, Linking Words
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computer-based activities were the least preferred choice by all at a 6% average.
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performances, the next highest activity was visual arts with 30% and Linking Words
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followed by writing at 17%. The remaining tasks scored the lowest at 11% and 10%, respectively.
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preferred performances the most at 22% and liked cultural purchases and crafts next at 17% each. Linking Words
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voted for visual arts, which is half of what the teenagers voted for.
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opted for undertaking crafts at 22%; the highest value for Use synonyms
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category in comparison to others. The same applies to the cultural purchases at 18%. Linking Words
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, writing and computer-based activities scored the lowest with Linking Words
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at 5% each.Use synonyms
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