The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams compare industrial consumption of electric resources including gas, nuclear,
petro
Correct your spelling
petrol
and other kinds in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, the vast majority of used electricity was coal in both years, whilst the least consumption was nuclear in 1995 and other types in 2005.
Initially
,
according to
the information shown in the pie charts, the use of coal was the main trend, which was 29.8% in 1995 and 30.93% in 2005. As the demand for nuclear increased, its percentage grew from 6.4% to 10.10% from 1995 to 2005.
By contrast
, the requirement of petro decreased from 29.27% to 19.55%. What should be particularly mentioned was the use of gas increased from 29.63% to 30.31%,
while
the other sorts of electricity
also
had growth in use as the proportion was 4.9% in 1995 and 9.1% in 2005.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that all the kinds of energy had enhancement in its demand in industries except for petro.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • industries
  • electricity usage
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • service sector
  • manufacturing sector
  • residential sector
  • agricultural sector
  • main features
  • summarize
  • reporting
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