The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The chart below gives information about the amounts of magazines sold
among
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in
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five countries in 2003, 2005, and estimated
sales
for 2007.
Overall
, it is evident that the most high-selling
country
is
Country
B, followed by
Country
A and
Country
C,
while
the least tabloid sold are in
Country
D and
Country
E.
To begin
with, from 2003 to 2005,
Country
B can be said to be the
country
with the highest tabloid
sales
. With successfully sold 50 tabloids in 2003,
although
there is a
down trend
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in 2005 with the number of tabloids sold being 47 and even the expected
sales
in 2007 touching 45, but still,
Country
B is still winning compared to
Country
A with 49 total
sales
in 2003, 43 in 2005, and estimated reduced
sales
in 2007 with only 38
sales
.
On the other hand
, other countries,
such
as
Country
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Countries
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C, D, and E, are facing low
sales
. Looking at the chart, these three countries never generate
sales
in the range of 40 or more.
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