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The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
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The chart below gives information about the amounts of magazines sold
among
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in
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 five countries in 2003, 2005, and estimated
sales
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 for 2007.
Overall
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, it is evident that the most high-selling
country
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 is
Country
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 B, followed by
Country
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 A and
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 C,
while
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 the least tabloid sold are in
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 D and
Country
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 E.
To begin
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 with, from 2003 to 2005,
Country
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 B can be said to be the
country
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 with the highest tabloid
sales
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. With successfully sold 50 tabloids in 2003,
although
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 there is a
down trend
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 in 2005 with the number of tabloids sold being 47 and even the expected
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 in 2007 touching 45, but still,
Country
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 B is still winning compared to
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 A with 49 total
sales
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 in 2003, 43 in 2005, and estimated reduced
sales
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 in 2007 with only 38
sales
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.
On the other hand
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, other countries,
such
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 as
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Country
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Countries
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 C, D, and E, are facing low
sales
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. Looking at the chart, these three countries never generate
sales
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 in the range of 40 or more.
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