The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The table illustrates the percentage of national consumer
expenditure
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for three categories of products and services in five
countries
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in 2002.
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, the most significant consumer
expenditure
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in all
countries
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was food, drinks, and tobacco,
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allocating the most minor shares of their spending to the leisure and education category. Regarding food, drinks, and tobacco, Turkey's
expenditure
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share was the highest at 32.14%, followed by nearly 29%. In the same category, the others spent under 20%, with Sweden having the lowest
expenditure
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at 15.77%. Compared to food, drinks, and tobacco, spending on clothing and footwear was noticeably lower in all
countries
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. Except for Italy, which spent 9% on these items, the figure for the other
countries
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's
expenditure
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in
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category was between 5% and 7%.
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, all nations spend less than 5% on leisure and education. People in Spain were at the bottom of
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section with only 1.98% of
expenditure
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, countries with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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