The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the number of people arrested divided by gender and type of crime.
Overall
, it can be seen that Violence against a person has the highest percentage among all categories.
The top 2 proportions are Violence against the person representing around 33% for females and about 31% for males and Theft and handling stolen goods has about 31% and nearly 20% respectively.
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Next,
the groups that stand above 5% are Other offences with 13% for women and almost 15% for men. The following group is Criminal damage: 7% for females and 10% for the other. Linking Words
Then
, the Drug offences group is slightly above 5% for women and about 7.5% for men.
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Lastly
, the groups that have very small numbers. Linking Words
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Burglary has about 3% of females Linking Words
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the opposite has about 7% proportion. Linking Words
Then
, the next 2 cohorts are Robbery and Fraud and forgery which are below 5% for both genders.Linking Words
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