You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You saw an online post of an important English academy looking for teachers to help underprivileged foreigner students. Write a letter of application to the company. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Explain why you are suitable for the job. • Provide details of your past work experience. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in connection with the vacancy opened for your English institution for an English tutor. My name is Sandhya Thapa Magar who has been residing in London, Ontario, Canada for the

last

five years. When I was scrolling through different online links, I came across your company websites which are searching for IELTS instructors in order to aid international scholars who are at a disadvantage. I can be a suitable candidate as a teacher for your academy

due to

my extensive language proficiency and teaching experience.

In particular

this

will enable me to effectively convey complex concepts and foster a supportive learning environment tailored to each student's needs. I have worked as an English tutor at Advantage Education Institution for three years. During my working period, I delivered a variety of curriculums or personalized lessons to students of different age groups who were thriving with their own needs.

In addition

, I have

also

conducted assessments in order to track the progress of learners and help them to reach their endeavours. With

this

enthusiasm, I think I will be a perfect candidate as a tutor in your academy. I have

also

attached my resume

along with

this

letter. I hope to hear back from you soon. Thank you.

Yousr

Correct your spelling

Yours

Your

faithfully. Sandhya

Submitted by sandhyathapamagar854 on Fri Jul 19 2024

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task achievement

Try to double-check for minor spelling or typographical errors. For instance, 'Yousr faithfully' should be 'Yours faithfully.'

coherence cohesion

Ensure that every sentence contributes towards a clear and cohesive argument. Although already strong, there is always room to make transitions between points slightly smoother.

task achievement

Your letter contains a polite and formal tone appropriate for an application.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making your letter easy to follow.

coherence cohesion

The structure of the letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion is well-presented.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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enthusiastic
passionate
underprivileged
foreign students
certification
degree in education
experience
suitability
skills
patience
cultural sensitivity
engage students
diverse backgrounds
methods
teaching philosophies
positive learning environment
volunteer work
community service
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