The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuk County at different times of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuk County at different times of the year.
The table gives information about
species
of birds one can observe in Woodchuck County in
summer
and
winter
.
Overall
, the observer studied eight different
species
. Almost every
species
in the table
appear
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appears
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in the
summer
,
while
only half of them can be seen in the
winter
. Five out of eight studied
species
are
one-season
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one season
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,
that is
, we can only see them in the
summer
or in the
winter
. Specifically, the bluebirds, the mockingbirds, the orioles and the vireos are expected to be observed in the
summer
only, which means they
travelled
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travel
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a long distance here for breeding and nesting before returning home in the
winter
. The juncos
is
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are
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the only
winter
species
in the table.
Besides
, there are
species
which appear in both seasons, namely the cardinals, the crows and the woodpeckers.
This
shows that these three
species
are not migratory birds, and they can tolerate the frigid weather in the
winter
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words species, summer, winter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.

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