Air travel has become cheaper than before. Some think it is a positive development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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has always been
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of the prime
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for
people
since time immemorial. Nowadays, we have more
transpor
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transport
facilities
such
as
train
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trains
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,
road
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, water and so on. Some
people
are
argueing
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arguing
that,
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air ticket
airtight
price getting lower is a positive development and the
other
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others
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where
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around. In my
opinion
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opinion,
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it is not a
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sign
of development. There are enormous causative factors
for
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my opinion. On the
one
hand, some
believes
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getting cheaper tickets
are indicate
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indicates
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the
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positive developments.
Air lines
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are more available than past and we can access the
world
through the flight service. It is a
develop ment
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development
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of a
nation
because an individual can travel through
world
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the world
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to find his or her job. It helps tourism of a
nation
. A country can invite more tourists
while
they get cheaper airways. Tourism is an inevitable aspect of a
nation
.
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, countries like India,
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are welcoming the
world
to explore
culture
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the culture
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and beauty of
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the nation
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. I
thing
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think
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,
if
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that if
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more providers conduct
schedule
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flights to
one
destination
is reducing
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it will reduce
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the charges.
more
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over
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citizens can explore the
world
and find more business opportunities. On
other
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hand, some
people
believes
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it is not good for development. They think the finomina causes
to
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brain drain. If
people
are able to travel to other
nation
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nations
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, the youngsters will go to other nations. It
reduce
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reduces
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our productivity and
man power
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manpower
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.
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, in
india
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, youngsters are moving
to
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abroad for
ther
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their
studies and work
it
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results
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resulting
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loss of skilled and
tallented
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talented
human
resouce
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resources
. Air
charg
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charge
always
depends
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depends on
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seasons
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. Only it can develop a
nation
. In my view,
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invetion
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invention
of cheaper travel
methord
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methods
developed the
world
. Because the
people
traveled
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travelled
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around the
world
and
creat
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create
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new business ideas.
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, in China,
they
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developed
while
they
open
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opened
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their country to the
world
and they
becomes
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one
of the largest
manufacture
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manufactures
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of
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in
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world
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