The pie chart below shows the amount of money that a chldren's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year

The pie chart below shows the amount of money that a chldren's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year
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The graph illustrates the annual amount of
incomes
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income
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and expenses of a
charity
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for children in the US.
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it is clear that
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the number of money that the
charity
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earned is higher than that of its consumption.
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while
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its revenues were from more than five
sources
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, the
charity
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just had to pay for three types of expenditure. Regarding the
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of income, donated food was the largest contribution, accounting for more than one-fifth of the whole earnings, at 86.6%.
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figure was over eight times
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the second-high revenue, which is the contributions from the community, with 10.4%. The other
sources
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as the revenue of the program, the investment returns, and grants from the governments took up only 3% of the total gains. In terms of expenditures, over 95% of the income was used for operating the program for children. The
charity
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spendings
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on raising funds and management/general were just 2.4% and 1.8%, respectively. Generally, with only three expense categories and up to five main
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of
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, the
charity
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was profitable, as its total amount received was higher than its total amount spent by over 300,000 dollars.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words charity, sources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • amount of money
  • children's charity
  • expenses
  • sources of income
  • spent
  • received
  • USA
  • one year
  • introduce
  • overview
  • main findings
  • overview
  • body paragraph
  • summarize
  • final thought
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