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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have Children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the couple who decide to do this.

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Nowadays, the popularity, of not becoming parents, is rising among wedded
couples
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 not raising children could positively impact income
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 the ease of life, there is a threat, to the country, of not having enough youngsters to rely on for its future. Another major drawback could be the loneliness in the
last
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 stage of life for people with
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 an ideology. On the one hand, there is a famous practice
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 increasingly getting followed in western countries mostly among married
couples
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 deciding not to have kids. They have named
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 way of living a DINC lifestyle, which means Double Income No Children. Obviously, without the stress of parenting, there will be a big scope for improving the finances of
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couples
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, they do need not to pay hefty school and college fees for someone. The survey of The Telegraph Newyork in March 2023,
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couples
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 without children are more wealthy than others who are raising kids at home.
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, there are many disadvantages associated with people who do not have any kids at home.
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, the country, where
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 a lifestyle is popular, could suffer from a shortage of young generations, which could potentially harm to country's growth, security, and leadership in many aspects.
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, the people from
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 community could suffer from a lack of emotional support when they become senior citizens.
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,
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 the one or zero-child policy of China, the nation is suffering from limited adult availability for joining military forces and abandoned old individuals are facing a great depression there. In conclusion, the trend of giving up on creating new generations is getting increasingly famous
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 its benefits like double salary and no responsibility of growing toddlers.
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,
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 practices could be impediments to the progress of the realm they are living in
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as
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worsen
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