In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, technological advancements are visible in all aspects of human lives.
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progresses
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in technology, self-driving
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would not be far-fetched in the near future. I believe that
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revolution in technology would cause overwhelming benefits in
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lives. In terms of benefits, the substantial significance of
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vehicles
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would be
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increase in the
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and severity of accidents on road networks. To illustrate
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, in Dubai, where
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driverless
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vehicles
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are being
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used for three years, the car accident rates have dropped by 30% in 2022. These
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are designed and programmed precisely
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; all the driving regulations and details of roads are introduced in
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system. By implementing
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system all over the world the violation of driving rules will reach to least,
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a considerable fall in the
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and severity of accidents would be predictable.
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, these
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cars
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would be accompanied
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some problems. Utilizing self-driving
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will result in losing
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jobs
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for taxi drivers. Since
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these
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do not need
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job will be faded.
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result
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taxi drivers will encounter financial difficulties.
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, because of the technology and science used in these
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, they will cost a fortune.
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, a myriad
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of people in the world would not afford to buy self-driver
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and it would be attainable merely for a slight
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of people. In conclusion,
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vehicles
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would
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be one of the benefits of technological advancements in the following years.
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it would not be without its challenges like unemployment or
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unaffordability
, I believe the dramatic decrease in accident rates will overtake the cons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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