In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, technological advancements are visible in all aspects of human lives.

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further

progresses

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in technology, self-driving

vehicles

would not be far-fetched in the near future. I believe that

this

revolution in technology would cause overwhelming benefits in

human’s

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lives. In terms of benefits, the substantial significance of

driverless

vehicles

would be

dramatic

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increase in the

number

and severity of accidents on road networks. To illustrate

this

, in Dubai, where

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driverless

vehicles

are being

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used for three years, the car accident rates have dropped by 30% in 2022. These

vehicles

are designed and programmed precisely

whereas

; all the driving regulations and details of roads are introduced in

this

system. By implementing

this

system all over the world the violation of driving rules will reach to least,

therefore

a considerable fall in the

number

and severity of accidents would be predictable.

Nevertheless

, these

driverless

cars

would be accompanied

with

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some problems. Utilizing self-driving

cars

will result in losing

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for taxi drivers. Since

,

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these

vehicles

do not need

driver

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drivers

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,

this

job will be faded.

As a

result

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taxi drivers will encounter financial difficulties.

Furthermore

, because of the technology and science used in these

cars

, they will cost a fortune.

Thus

, a myriad

number

of people in the world would not afford to buy self-driver

cars

and it would be attainable merely for a slight

number

of people. In conclusion,

driverless

vehicles

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be one of the benefits of technological advancements in the following years.

Although

it would not be without its challenges like unemployment or

unaffordablity

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unaffordability

, I believe the dramatic decrease in accident rates will overtake the cons.