Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. They think all health problems can just be “fixed” by visiting doctors. What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved.

Healthcare

is one of the most paramount affairs to discuss because of its correlation with human being’s existence. Nowadays,

doctors

have been placed as the main figure for people in solving their health issues, so seldom have people thought about maintaining it by themselves.

This

essay will address two possible problems caused by

this

phenomenon

as well as

its potential solutions.

Firstly

,

doctors

may be overstretched and not be spending enough time with the

patients

who need their help the most. If the

patients

with severe conditions were not treated immediately, their condition would be getting worse.

For instance

, there are many practicing

doctors

in Indonesia who prioritize

patients

in their practice,

then

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ignore

patients

who are dying in the hospital where they work.

Secondly

, the

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in

healthcare

fees. The more

patients

who visit

healthcare

facilities

, even for lighter signs of their diseases, the more possibility of rising

healthcare

costs will happen.

For example

, in the United States, since populations are becoming unhealthy, they need long-term

healthcare

that’s more complex and resource-intensive than routine care which comes with a high

price

.

Nevertheless

, two possible solutions are provided here.

First,

greater

healthcare

provision is needed. The

number

of

patients

is

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always

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the

number

of

doctors

and

healthcare

facilities

;

consequently

, providing an adequate

number

of

doctors

and

healthcare

facilities

is urgent.

For instance

, the government can make a policy to send

doctors

and build

healthcare

facilities

in rural

in rural

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areas, so the accumulation of

patients

in a certain area can be avoided.

Second,

a policy concerning

the

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healthcare

fee

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fees

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should be made by the

authority

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authorities

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to avoid the aptness of private hospitals raising their fee.

For example

, a new regulation that arranges the

price

of

healthcare

service

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services

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can be issued by a local administration. In a nutshell, the doctor’s hectic schedule and the increasing

healthcare

price

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prices

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are problems that may arise when people rely on

doctors

too much.

However

, it can be solved by raising the

number

of

doctors

and providing

healthcare

infrastructures, especially in

the

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rural areas. Another solution is to issue regulations regarding the

price

of health services.