In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advanatages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Hard work usually is the minimum requirement to achieve anything, but that
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the case. Life is complicated and there are many factors that Verb problem
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would
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a good luck
. Obtaining a fortuitous chance in order to accomplish our goal is not something that would be under our control even if we have already Remove the article
good luck
a bit of good luck
a stroke of good luck
a piece of good luck
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children
to keep trying, but if the circumstances around him/her are not favorable
enough in order to reach that objective, Change the spelling
favourable
then
it would be pointless. The role of the parents in my opinion should be the one to open the path for the children
by creating a possibility that could lead to a favorable situation. It could be anything from enrolling the said children
to some courses or classes that could hone their innante
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last
option could be considered as nepotism in
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and ethically unacceptable, but as long as the way to obtain the prospect is legal under the law, Add a missing verb
is morally
then
it should be fine. Good parents with excellent moral compass would certainly only choose the first option. If the said children
still could not
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cannot
then
it is up to their parents' intention whether to resort to the second option or simply told
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children
that it is time to give up. Whether the said children
would give up or not in the end, as long as they already work hard, then
the most important lesson that life is not always going according to
our plan is already being learnedSubmitted by maukaburtubel on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite