The Annual graphs bar below illustrate the number of visitors using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000
The Annual graphs bar below illustrate the number of visitors using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000
Airport
traffic charts include traffic date
from three airports named John Correct your spelling
data
F.Kenedy
Liguria and Newark . All Correct your spelling
F. Kennedy
this
graphs show growth.Change the determiner
these
Its
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It's
notible
that LA Guardia loaded Correct your spelling
notable
airport
in 1995 remain
first in 2000. Another fact Wrong verb form
remained
that
Newark the unloaded Add a missing verb
is that
airport
in 1995 illustrate
large Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
raise
and almost Correct your spelling
rise
equaled
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equalled
with
LaGuardia the second Change preposition
apply
one
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apply
airport
.
Orange
and Gray graphs the highest and lowest charts converge on a large Correct article usage
The Orange
increase
between 1995 and 2000 the orange one from 35 to about 65. The gray graph also
almost doubled show
a Wrong verb form
showing
unormous
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enormous
increase
from 15 to approximately 40
Last
but not last
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least
of
important is John F Change preposition
apply
Kennedy
chart . Change noun form
Kennedy's
This
graph is not like the others becouse
the others Correct your spelling
because
shows
a gradual annual Correct subject-verb agreement
show
increase
but this
one show
fluctuations Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
although
in general it has positive
trend. Add an article
a positive
This
chart increase
from approximately 25 to around 45.Change the verb form
increases
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