The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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along with
the prediction for 2030 and 2040. Calibration of data is done in percentages.
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the population
Malasia
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Malaysia
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the Philippines
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Malaysia
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Philippines
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the population
Malasia
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Malaysia
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until 2010 and after that slightly increased and it is predicted to 55% in 2040.
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the Philippines
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persentage
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percentage
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