The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is the sole driver behind one’s persistent diligence and tenacity at work. I completely disagree with

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should be among the top priorities during work for any individual looking to make a living and meet fundamental needs for themselves. It seems logical that without salaries as the ultimate objective, any concerns about leading a good quality of life or having improved living standards may become irrelevant. On top of these necessities,

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hold responsibility for maintaining financial stability in their families,

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tax

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to the government.

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, by earning a decent amount of income, not only could parents provide their children with proper education and good care, but their contribution to the sustainable growth of the national economy

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matters - given that their tax payments would later be allocated for other essential social sectors

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as healthcare, education or environmental preservation.

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, I believe that maximizing wages is most likely not the only aim when pursuing a career. One significant motivator driving the diligence of

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might simply be immense enthusiasm and strong desires that they genuinely dedicate to their jobs.

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can be commonly seen among artists or freelancers who place a relatively strong emphasis on the appreciation of beauty and the making of their

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of being under constant pressure to make a fortune.

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, there are

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individuals whose main aim of work only revolves around social contribution, and firefighters are a case in point. The fact that many firefighters are willing to risk their lives to rescue others more often than not shows that

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is not their main motivation

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and that an altruistic wish to help

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far exceeds any other causes. These purposes, in turn, might mentally enrich workers

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to humanitarian reasons. In conclusion, I believe that making

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is presumably not the only purpose of

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working industriously, but job interests and societal contribution ought to be taken into consideration as well.