The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.
The table below indicates the consumption expenses
on
different items in five different Change preposition
for
countries
in 2002.
Overall
, the disbursing on food and drinks, tobacco
was the highest level in all five different Correct word choice
and tobacco
countries
. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
leisure
and education
has
the lowest consumption. Ireland and Change the verb form
have
Spain
residents consume the bottom on leisure
and education
as withstand
to Turkey and Verb problem
compared
Spain
.
Turkish
and Irish people about 29% and 32% spent their money on food, drinks and tobacco. Change preposition
Of Turkish
On the other hand
, approximately 6% of consumption was on clothing and footwear in Turkey and Ireland countries
.
Nearly 19% of the spending was on food, drinks and tobacco in Sweden, Italy and Spain
. Whereas
, the expenditure on leisure
and education
was the same in give
information about Change the verb form
giving
countries
. The clothing Italians spent 9%, while
, Sweden spent 5.4%, and Spain
expenditure was 6.51%. In Change noun form
Spain's
Spain
on
Change preposition
apply
education
and leisure
which was the lowest in all five different countries
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