The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.
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The table below indicates the consumption expenses
on
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for
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different items in five different
countries
in 2002.
Overall
, the disbursing on food and drinks,
tobacco
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and tobacco
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was the highest level in all five different
countries
.
While
,
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leisure
and
education
has
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have
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the lowest consumption. Ireland and
Spain
residents consume the bottom on
leisure
and
education
as
withstand
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compared
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to Turkey and
Spain
.
Turkish
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Of Turkish
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and Irish people about 29% and 32% spent their money on food, drinks and tobacco.
On the other hand
, approximately 6% of consumption was on clothing and footwear in Turkey and Ireland
countries
. Nearly 19% of the spending was on food, drinks and tobacco in Sweden, Italy and
Spain
.
Whereas
, the expenditure on
leisure
and
education
was the same in
give
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giving
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information about
countries
. The clothing Italians spent 9%,
while
, Sweden spent 5.4%, and
Spain
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Spain's
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expenditure was 6.51%. In
Spain
on
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apply
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education
and
leisure
which was the lowest in all five different
countries
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, leisure, education, spain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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