Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Working from

home

is happening worldwide, and it

follows

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by youngsters who start to study from

home

, the reason behind

this

phenomeneon

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phenomenon

is the span of

techology

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technological

advancement that can be accessed and affordable for everyone. I believe that

this

is a positive development,

eventhough

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even though

there are a few negative

aspect

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that still need to be taken care of. On the one hand, working or studying from

home

can be a solutive method to avoid stress for

cummuters

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commuters

computers

and

decreasing

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the

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apply

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air pollution. As said by

professional

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professionals

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that

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apply

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burning out from work majority caused by

the

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apply

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traffic congestion. People

strives

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to go to work either with inadequate public transportation that

pushing

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them to wake up so early just to secure one seat, or using a private car and trapped

into

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tied traffic jam.

Do

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this

from

home

can cut

the

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time

and provide them

a

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with a

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space to do much

more

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better preparation for work.

On the other hand

, performing

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the job

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job

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jobs

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and

study

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studying

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from

home

can help

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the family

a family

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family

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families

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to bond closer. In

this

modern era, it is normal

to

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for

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both parents to have a job, for a mother working from

home

and having her children

to

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study at

home

too can be a win-win

sollution

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solution

, so they can have their

time

together

while

still finishing their

obligation

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.

Eventhough

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Even though

there are

also

household

disturbance

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can't

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be

neglect

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neglected

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such

as the sound of

vacum

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vacuum

cleaner or cooking utensils.

To sum up

, working from

home

occurs in all countries across the world, followed by studying from

home

. In my

opinion

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opinion,

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it is a positive

developement

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development

because it can cut air pollution from vehicles, and traffic jam

moreover

it

also

provide

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more

time

for parent and children to promote quality

time

.