Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegatables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some oppose it. Discuss both views.

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for delivery the crops for various nations which do not grow in
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tough weather conditions or even the season. Some thoughts believe that it is a wonderful route
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to other opinions.
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this
accurately. On the one hand, the benefits it brings to society are undeniable. It enables the inhabitants to enjoy fresh fruits from another country
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the location.
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the relationships between two nations because of the reaps which are provided.
For instance
,
due to
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delivery
, some may be grateful for respective support and it improves the cohesion of the two countries.
As a consequence
, the conveniences and advantages will be useful for improving our country in terms of
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finance and diplomacy.
On the other hand
, there is a host of compelling reasons that there may
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some negative effects on our society, particularly our Earth. The action
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airplanes
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for shipping crops to others can produce carbon dioxide and cause the greenhouse effect.
Therefore
, it
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air pollution
due to
the emission from the fuels consumed and
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the earth by producing more carbon dioxide which is toxic and unhealthy for residents there.
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, it is
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logical to contend that
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the Earth. Concluding the details above, the delivery of planes can cause significant negative effects on
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,
inspite
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in spite
of its convenience.
Therefore
, people should not use aircraft as a transport to provide crops for
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others.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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