Aircrafts have been increasing use to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it is a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many
Use synonyms
air
Correct your spelling
aeroplanes
planes
nowadays have been more and more for transporting a large number of crops to some nations where are hard to plant. It is thought that it is a good idea, Use synonyms
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while
there are still other people opposing it. Correct word choice
but
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essay, Linking Words
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writer will introduce the views about Linking Words
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problem and demonstrate them.
There are many reasons why many Linking Words
aircrafts
should be used for transporting the seeds. Indeed, many Correct your spelling
aircraft
planes
currently can fly with enormous speed, meaning that they can bring enough fruits and vegetables for many people in many countries quickly by flying via Use synonyms
air
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, many nations have unsuitable or extreme weather for planting some particular reaps Linking Words
such
as China or Russia. Linking Words
For instance
, China pays less attention to agriculture like wheat, so Linking Words
this
country has to enhance Linking Words
import
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imports
for buying
more necessary nutrients to serve Change preposition
to buy
human’s
demand. Change noun form
human
Hence
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
air
Correct your spelling
airplanes
planes
should be used for delivering food.
Alternatively, there are still some drawbacks Use synonyms
about
airlinersChange preposition
to
exposing
, and one of the main disadvantages is emitting a huge quantity of gases. It is true because they have to deliver fruit for a very long distance between many nations. Verb problem
apply
As a consequence
, they might consume so many fossil fuels which are really high in toxic Linking Words
emission
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emissions
such
as coal, gases or oil. Linking Words
For example
, a study conducted in Canada Linking Words
prove
that 26% of Change the verb form
proves
totally
carbon dioxide emitted has Change the word
total
detrimental
effect on the atmosphere. Add an article
a detrimental
Thus
, we can plant alternative crops Linking Words
instead
of using many vehicles contributing the Linking Words
air
pollution.
In conclusion, I am of my opinion to say that using Use synonyms
planes
is a good idea. Notwithstanding, it can make the Use synonyms
air
more polluted by carbon dioxide. Use synonyms
Therefore
, we should not overuse Linking Words
planes
and plant some favorable seeds to make the atmosphere Use synonyms
cleanlier
.Replace the word
cleaner
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