Aircrafts have been increasing use to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it is a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many
air
Correct your spelling
aeroplanes
planes
nowadays have been more and more for transporting a large number of crops to some nations where are hard to plant. It is thought that it is a good idea, while
there are still other people opposing it. Correct word choice
but
Therefore
, in this
essay, this
writer will introduce the views about this
problem and demonstrate them.
There are many reasons why many aircrafts
should be used for transporting the seeds. Indeed, many Correct your spelling
aircraft
planes
currently can fly with enormous speed, meaning that they can bring enough fruits and vegetables for many people in many countries quickly by flying via air
. Furthermore
, many nations have unsuitable or extreme weather for planting some particular reaps such
as China or Russia. For instance
, China pays less attention to agriculture like wheat, so this
country has to enhance import
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imports
for buying
more necessary nutrients to serve Change preposition
to buy
human’s
demand. Change noun form
human
Hence
, air
Correct your spelling
airplanes
planes
should be used for delivering food.
Alternatively, there are still some drawbacks about
airlinersChange preposition
to
exposing
, and one of the main disadvantages is emitting a huge quantity of gases. It is true because they have to deliver fruit for a very long distance between many nations. Verb problem
apply
As a consequence
, they might consume so many fossil fuels which are really high in toxic emission
Change the noun form
emissions
such
as coal, gases or oil. For example
, a study conducted in Canada prove
that 26% of Change the verb form
proves
totally
carbon dioxide emitted has Change the word
total
detrimental
effect on the atmosphere. Add an article
a detrimental
Thus
, we can plant alternative crops instead
of using many vehicles contributing the air
pollution.
In conclusion, I am of my opinion to say that using planes
is a good idea. Notwithstanding, it can make the air
more polluted by carbon dioxide. Therefore
, we should not overuse planes
and plant some favorable seeds to make the atmosphere cleanlier
.Replace the word
cleaner
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