Aircrafts have been increasing use to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it is a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many
air
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aeroplanes
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planes
nowadays have been more and more for transporting a large number of crops to some nations where are hard to plant. It is thought that it is a good idea,
while
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there are still other people opposing it.
Therefore
, in
this
essay,
this
writer will introduce the views about
this
problem and demonstrate them. There are many reasons why many
aircrafts
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aircraft
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should be used for transporting the seeds. Indeed, many
planes
currently can fly with enormous speed, meaning that they can bring enough fruits and vegetables for many people in many countries quickly by flying via
air
.
Furthermore
, many nations have unsuitable or extreme weather for planting some particular reaps
such
as China or Russia.
For instance
, China pays less attention to agriculture like wheat, so
this
country has to enhance
import
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imports
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for buying
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more necessary nutrients to serve
human’s
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human
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demand.
Hence
,
air
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airplanes
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planes
should be used for delivering food. Alternatively, there are still some drawbacks
about
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airliners
exposing
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, and one of the main disadvantages is emitting a huge quantity of gases. It is true because they have to deliver fruit for a very long distance between many nations.
As a consequence
, they might consume so many fossil fuels which are really high in toxic
emission
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emissions
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such
as coal, gases or oil.
For example
, a study conducted in Canada
prove
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that 26% of
totally
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carbon dioxide emitted has
detrimental
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a detrimental
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effect on the atmosphere.
Thus
, we can plant alternative crops
instead
of using many vehicles contributing the
air
pollution. In conclusion, I am of my opinion to say that using
planes
is a good idea. Notwithstanding, it can make the
air
more polluted by carbon dioxide.
Therefore
, we should not overuse
planes
and plant some favorable seeds to make the atmosphere
cleanlier
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.
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