Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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fruit and
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vegetables
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selling market, the government has been using
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as an effective method to transport them to countries which is experiencing bad harvests.
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writer partly considers that
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can significantly reduce the transporting hours and increase the contracts between institutions despite some
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that it is way too fuel-consuming. On the one hand, there is no doubt that more and more up-to-date
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aeroplanes
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have various functions and superb speed to move from one place to the other.
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is why they have been developed and used as a new method to transport fruits and
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the products can be transported
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a high quantity within a short period of time. Take China as a realistic example, the government has invested in upgrading and using planes that
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a shortage of fuel but travel a very long route during its flight.
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, the contracts may require
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a lot of
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like better preservation machines inside the plane, or
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collaboration from two sides.
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, it must be acknowledged that during the flight, the quality of fruits and
vegetables
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will be worsened and when it reaches the planned destination, the prices may go down a little bit. Take Australia as an example, the current surveys illustrate the analyses that the quality of products which are grown in the country is more delicious more than 50% than those
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abroad.
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writer believes that it is worth considering
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solution to gain more profits for the countries because of its advantages.
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, managers can easily deal with issues during the process in the transport system.
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may
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generate well-paid jobs and decrease the unemployment proportion. In conclusion, using helicopters to move fruits and
vegetables
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to other countries has two sides but it may be effective if a very short time is needed to complete the contracts.

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