Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Transporting

fruit

and

vegetables

have

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been increasingly done by

aircraft

to countries where

such

plants are hard to grow or out of season.

This

writer was contending that

aircraft

provide high speed and low temperature so that

fruit

and

vegetables

are fresh and it would cost less because of flying straight,

while

some individuals believe that

aircraft

may

damage

fruit

and

vegetables

or the plane only transport if there are enough orders. It must be acknowledged that

fruit

and

vegetables

will only be valuable if they are not rotten so they need good caring condition

and

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aircraft

was the perfect choice

due to

its high speed and the

aircraft

fly very high above the ground so the condition there is very cold so that food could not get rotten easily. The

aircraft

move straight from the airport to the destination so the price is cheaper than moving to a lot of

station

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.

Other

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point worth

to consider

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is that the fast movement of

aircraft

may cause

damage

to the goods and because of

its

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size,

aircraft

need to fill

its

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space fully before

move

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moving

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to reduce the cost of each flight.

This

is a value point but most

of

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apply

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fruit

and

vegetables

are packed very carefully and the demand

of

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for

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transporting is high so the goods would be transported

with

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at

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the right time and less

damage

as possible. In conclusion, transporting

fruit

and

vegetables

have

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has

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many options and

aircraft

is a superior choice because

aircraft

could

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provide high speed and great condition to maintain the fresh of goods

,.

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,

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Although

damage

may happen and there is delay time to wait for enough orders, those would be reduced maximally.