Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, some
countries
with poor
condition
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conditions
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to plant fruit and
vegetables
have been
got supply
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from
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aircraft
, which transport fruit and
vegetables
for those
countries
.
This
issue has been debated and
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two different views, agreement and disagreement. From my perspective, those
countries
gaining the supply from planes would develop in all fields. To commence with, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant is that undoubtedly,
aircraft
has transformed in all aspects and presently folk prefer to
extensive
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utilize it for carrying their basics fruits and
vegetables
to a remote area where It is not cultivated. To cite an example, in the
past
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we couldn’t export our products to other
countries
because of easy transportation,
however
, we
also
Couldn't buy our needs from
this
country
which was hard to grow. It
also
leads to improving a
country
.
In addition
to
this
, there are numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only does one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease,efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand out in good stead, as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned. As for those who think that transporting fruit and
vegetables
would be affected badly on the
developing
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of the
countries
,it could bring some drawbacks in lots of sites, even the environment and the nations. Using
aircraft
has several disadvantages not only polluting our environment but
also
increasing commodities prices.
For instance
, when we export our crops to another
country
which needs preservation
as a result
many farmers use chemicals which
also
harmful to our health. The downsides of the stated topic are not undeniable. Agreeably, the
countries
gaining vegan food from the others would have the sources to develop the
countries
. The
countries
have
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the
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food from other
countries
could help
increasing
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the finance of that
country
.
As the
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case of using
aircraft
to transport food,
it
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apply
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could affect badly on the environment,
however
, it
not
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too
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have too
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much To recapitulate, by taking all the aforementioned arguments into deep consideration it is apparent that the benefits of
aircraft
are too great to ignore the demerits of any products in the current age.
Although
there are some non-negligible impacts of
aircraft
, it is
also
vital for
the
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apply
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countries
where
such
plants hardly grow or are out of season.

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