The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in

the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between

2003 and 2013.
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The bar chart represents how regularly citizens in America ate in fast food restaurants in a 10-
year
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period divided by six categories,
such
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as “every day”, “several
times
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a week”, “once a week”, “once or twice a month”, “a few
times
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a
year
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”, and “never”, measured in per cent.
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,
it is clear that
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the percentage of people who went to fast food outlets once or twice a month, and a few
times
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a
year
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experienced a rise,
while
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the percentage of those who never, and went daily had diminished trend. The proportion of persons who ate in fast food restaurants once a week and once or twice a month comprised roughly 31% and 30%, respectively, in 2003.
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, the “once a week” group had escalated marginally but
then
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dropped to just above a quarter
in
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seven years later.
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, the “once or twice” group plummeted to exactly a quarter and accounted
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moderate jump to a third in the final
year
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. As regards, the several
times
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a week category had a plateau situation in a decade that had reached a peak of one-fifth in 2006 after three years previously experiencing a slight climb and settling back to just beyond 15% in 2013. Meanwhile, society went to there a few
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a
year
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experienced escalated steadily from nearly a sixth to stabilise at the exact 15% later by 2006 and 2013. The “never” and “every day” classifications plunged marginally throughout the
year
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before levelling off in the remaining seven years with no more than 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times, “once, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "marginally" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast-food consumption
  • frequently
  • economic downturn
  • age demographics
  • lifestyles
  • health consciousness
  • advertising campaigns
  • affordable dining
  • healthier alternatives
  • consumer habits
  • proliferation
  • trend analysis
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