Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Pursuing fads and
fashion
tendencies is tough and the majority of communities believe that fashion
companies
try to make more profit and people
should not imitate them and just we should follow our interests. I strongly agree with this
statement because not only are our culture
and historical customs
missed, but also
many of these trends
are not casual.
Nowadays, the majority of individuals particularly youngsters do not pay attention to the historical customs
and these kinds of clothes
being forgotten. Fad companies
try to present different clothes
that are contradictory to our culture
and by following them, society allows them to increase the production of anomalous clothes
. As a consequence
, young people
try to imitate them and it culminates in neglecting traditional dresses and as a result
forgetting their culture
. For instance
, many tribes living in Iran have their specific culture
and traditional customs
that are being forgotten and many of the young people
have no knowledge about them by pursuing fashion
trends
.
It is clear that
many fashion
companies
try to produce some clothes
that are signed and they just endeavour to attract a following. Many companies
employ numerous famous people
including actors or actresses to wear their products even though they are not comfortable in order to show some issues that exist in the societies. The majority of these kinds of trends
are not suitable for daily life and are not casual and many of them do not align with our passion. Due to
that people
should not focus on the trends
and they just follow what they are interested in and make their own style. For example
, all actors and actresses wear unnormal clothes
in the Oscar ceremonies which are designed by popular companies
like Gucci and some of them are very heavy or made from specific materials that are not suitable for daily life.
In conclusion, fashion
companies
produce various clothes
that we should not follow because it leads us to forget our history and traditional customs
, moreover
, these kinds of outfits are not produced for normal activities and routine life.Submitted by hadadianmohamadhossein on
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