Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Pursuing fads and
fashion
tendencies is tough and the majority of communities believe that Use synonyms
fashion
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companies
try to make more profit and Use synonyms
people
should not imitate them and just we should follow our interests. I strongly agree with Use synonyms
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statement because not only are our Linking Words
culture
and historical Use synonyms
customs
missed, but Use synonyms
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many of these Linking Words
trends
are not casual.
Nowadays, the majority of individuals particularly youngsters do not pay attention to the historical Use synonyms
customs
and these kinds of Use synonyms
clothes
being forgotten. Fad Use synonyms
companies
try to present different Use synonyms
clothes
that are contradictory to our Use synonyms
culture
and by following them, society allows them to increase the production of anomalous Use synonyms
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As a consequence
, young Linking Words
people
try to imitate them and it culminates in neglecting traditional dresses and Use synonyms
as a result
forgetting their Linking Words
culture
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For instance
, many tribes living in Iran have their specific Linking Words
culture
and traditional Use synonyms
customs
that are being forgotten and many of the young Use synonyms
people
have no knowledge about them by pursuing Use synonyms
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trends
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It is clear that
many Linking Words
fashion
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companies
try to produce some Use synonyms
clothes
that are signed and they just endeavour to attract a following. Many Use synonyms
companies
employ numerous famous Use synonyms
people
including actors or actresses to wear their products even though they are not comfortable in order to show some issues that exist in the societies. The majority of these kinds of Use synonyms
trends
are not suitable for daily life and are not casual and many of them do not align with our passion. Use synonyms
Due to
that Linking Words
people
should not focus on the Use synonyms
trends
and they just follow what they are interested in and make their own style. Use synonyms
For example
, all actors and actresses wear unnormal Linking Words
clothes
in the Oscar ceremonies which are designed by popular Use synonyms
companies
like Gucci and some of them are very heavy or made from specific materials that are not suitable for daily life.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
fashion
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companies
produce various Use synonyms
clothes
that we should not follow because it leads us to forget our history and traditional Use synonyms
customs
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moreover
, these kinds of outfits are not produced for normal activities and routine life.Linking Words
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