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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both view.

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Some people believe that using planes to convey
fruit
 and
vegetables
 to other countries is a good trend,
while
 others think that that way is bad. It is the opinion of
this
 writer that transporting organic food by aeroplane is beneficial and will show why. On the one hand, using aeroplanes to deliver
fruit
 and
vegetables
 is convenient. All planes can fly at high speed, which is far faster than other transport ways
such
 as rail roads or waterways.
Therefore
, we can spend less time moving goods from place to place and our produce will stay fresh when they arrive. What is more, air freight transportation will not be blocked by any geographic conditions so that the exportation can spread out over the world. That leads to the convenience of exporting and importing fruits and
vegetables
 from another country.
On the other hand
, it is acknowledged that our planet is in an environmental crisis where the habitat is being damaged badly.
Therefore
, the authorities should take action to prevent the worst scenario by forcing the aircraft to spread
fruit
 and vegetable seeds all over the world, especially in harsh environments
such
 as deserts. By repetitively doing
this
 action, soil and dirt erosion will be alleviated considerably. From my perspective, the aircraft-delivery trend is still a good idea because the
fruit
 and
vegetables
 will be protected by the design of the aircraft. Almost all delivery planes are
equippedwith
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equipped with
asystem
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system
a system
 that prevents goods from external impact
such
 as temperature, humidity, ….
Therefore
, fruits and
vegetables
 will be safe throughout the journey.
To conclude
, the writer contends that it is a good idea to use aircraft to transport fruits and vegetable to the collision area as it will boost the biodiversity
as well as
 provides a wide range of food to local residents. Theoretically,
this
 action will boost the country's income by a fifth in the near future.

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