The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married in one particular country in 1996 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and repairing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married in one particular country in 1996 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and repairing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar graphs compare the
marriage
ages of both sexes in a country between 1996 and 2008.
Overall
,
while
the proportion of women aged 25 to 29 maintained its dominant status throughout the period, the general
marriage
age
for men remarkably increased. Regarding the ages of female
marriage
, the
percentage
of the 16-19
age
group shrunk drastically from approximately 1% to virtually 0%, which is the lowest out of all
age
categories.
Similarly
, the
percentage
of the 20-24 and 35-39
age
groups declined roughly by half, from 6% to 3% and 4% to just over 2%, respectively.
In contrast
, that of 30 to 34-year-old women witnessed a subtle increase of around 1%, and the rise in the
percentage
of the 40-44
age
group was negligible. Concerning male
marriage
age
, the proportion of 20-24 and 25-29
age
groups slightly decreased, constituting 2% and 8% in 2018 respectively. Over time, marriages predominantly occurred in older
age
groups as the
percentage
of men aged 30 to 34 and 35 to 39 both soared by over 1%. Noticeably, 16 to 19-year-old men in
this
country did not get married throughout the entire period.
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