The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graphs compare the number of
hours
used electrical devices including washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners in the housework in the 10-year period (1920-2019). From an overall
perspective, while
the peak hour was fifty hours
per week in 1920, the less time was 10 hours
per week in 2019.
As shown in the details, the refrigerator showed an upward trend
from 1920 to 1980, and after that, it remained stable trend
to 2019. In the case of the vacuum cleaner, it showed that it had a significant rise from 1920 to 2000 and that this
trend
was stable until 1920. Furthermore
, the washing machine showed fluctuations in between, but overall
the trend
was upward.
As observed in the line graphs, the usage hours
of the mentioned gadgets decreased gradually from 50 to 20 hours
per week to 1960. On the contrary
, this
trend
dropped changed from 20 to 10 hours
in 2019.Submitted by minasarani64 on
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