The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The

process

graph provides the stages of creating

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a process

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for making

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Overall

, it can be seen that the stages of

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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process

can be separated into several groups: some of

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are realised by biological laws and by physical labour of employees

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use special

equipment

.

On the other hand

, the final steps are realised by chemical and physical processes within production

equipment

.

Furthermore

, the

process

contains 7 stages in total. The first stage is related to biological laws and

presented

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by growing

sugar

canes (it takes from 12 to 18 months). Afterwards, the plants are harvested by employees

within

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using the

equipment

.

Thirdly

, the

sugar

canes

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ground by special

equipment

to get the juice. Later, the juice is purified by

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filter.

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the

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5th

stage

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the purified juice goes into

evaporator

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the evaporator

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where it’s become

to

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syrup by heat. During

this

time the syrup is influenced by centrifuge which leads to the separation

sugar

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of sugar

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crystals from the syrup. Eventually, the

sugar

is dried and cooled by the

equipment

.