In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people . Why might this be the case? Do you thing this is negative or positive solution.

People in some countries believe that living in someone's apartment as payment is not good for living as compared to staying in their own building.

This

is

due to

a

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huge amount of pay needed to pay. I believe that owning a

house

is a positive situation because no need to pay huge money in rent .

First,

staying in a rented home is difficult.

This

is

due to

follow the owner's instructions all the time. We cannot live in our ways

for instance

if we need to have a party or any celebration we have to get permission from the owner.

Secondly

, the rent price is high

especially

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in urban areas. We need to pay an extra amount for the maintenance of that

house

,

for example

, to pay payment if anything breaks in the

house

.

Consequently

, owning an own

house

is a positive trend.

This

is because we can reconstruct the

house

in our own way. We don't need to take permission from the owner.

For example

, the decoration of the

house

is facilitated .

Also

, we can welcome as many guests as possible

for instance

, we can invite many people to our

house

for birthdays or any celebrations. In conclusion, owning

own

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home makes it possible to stay in peace in aspects of money no need to pay

rental

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and we can décor the apartment in our own way.