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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Being critical towards
information
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 online is a crucial skill to learn since the
internet
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 is filled with news posted by anybody.
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, I do think, that a lot of
information
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 found online is trustworthy for various different reasons and it's not true that we cannot trust anything we read online just because it is not verified by the government. Having the chance to publish real-life footage from the
events
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such
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 as natural disasters or strikes, gives
people
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 the possibility to view those
events
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 from different perspectives. Often, news sources provided by the official governmental institutions are biased or one-sided, in terms of their opinion, and,
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, they do not show
events
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 at the fullest.
People
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 are able to critically observe the situation and form their opinions based on different narrators on the
internet
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.
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, the biggest newspapers, which are considered trustworthy, cannot as quickly update certain
events
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 as
internet
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 platforms
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 as social media, where individuals are posting in real-time.
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, the
internet
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 makes it possible to hear the voices of
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minority groups
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 as indigenous culture representatives, disabled
people
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 or immigrants, because the
information
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 there is not as filtered as it is in the newspapers.
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, newspapers or
information
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 provided on TV is limited in space and time and
as a result
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, some of the important pieces of
information
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 are simply not given to the
people
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. Staying up to date is more accurate online.
To conclude
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,
although
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 it is important to stay critical towards the things we read online, in my opinion, news sources
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 as social media can give more accurate, not biased, and more complex
information
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 to
people
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 since it is not as filtered as it is in other sources.
People
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 are given the possibility to form their own opinions.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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