You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear librarian, I am afraid to say, I would like to turn to you for help. My name is Mia Parker and I am a sophomore in the Department of Physical Sciences at the University of Cambridge. On October 10, 2023, I checked out

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from the library with a deadline of November 10.

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my time coincided well and I took the

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. But recently I was informed that my grandmother is very sick. She has cancer and now she is in the hospital, the doctors say she needs someone there to look after her. At the moment, no one except me can land a hand

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. My parents are abroad and we have no other relatives.

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I want to extend the time for issuing

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. Because

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very necessary for my studies. I want to extend for 1 month, can you help me with it? I think you can understand me.

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faithfully, Mia Parker

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

162 words

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