You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear librarian, I am afraid to say, I would like to turn to you for help. My name is Mia Parker and I am a sophomore in the Department of Physical Sciences at the University of Cambridge. On October 10, 2023, I checked out

books

from the library with a deadline of November 10.

Then

my time coincided well and I took the

books

. But recently I was informed that my grandmother is very sick. She has cancer and now she is in the hospital, the doctors say she needs someone there to look after her. At the moment, no one except me can land a hand

her

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to her

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. My parents are abroad and we have no other relatives.

For

this

reason

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reason,

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I want to extend the time for issuing

books

. Because

books

are

also

very necessary for my studies. I want to extend for 1 month, can you help me with it? I think you can understand me.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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faithfully, Mia Parker

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