Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good ide,but some people oppose it . Discuss both view and give your opinion

Some
people
think about the use of aeroplanes to transport fruit and
vegetables
.
While
some
people
argue that it would be unreasonable to carry them. I believe
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that transport generally has more benefits on several levels.
On the other hand
,
people
in that country can enjoy
fruits
that their country doesn't have one
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have
a reason or conditions
aren't
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that aren't
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suitable for growing
such
fruit.
Air
transportation and
because
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the shelf life of
fruits
and
vegetables
is
also
poor. They are not quick. So
this
requires some quick means to transport it from
a
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one
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country to another.
For example
, the average temperature in South America isn't favourable for growing
fruits
and
vegetables
, so most of these products are usually imported from North America.
People
rely entirely on North America for a wide variety of
fruits
and
vegetables
. Once these
fruits
and
vegetables
are exported , their prices are likely to increase by 40 to 50 per cent
due to
air
freight and associated taxes between the two countries.
Therefore
, only a few
people
can afford to buy
such
fruits
and
vegetables
. Advantageous as the airline is, the airline itself, requires tonnes of fuel like coal, oil, and gas to activate the engines.
Therefore
,
this
is the main reason why many
people
reject using aircraft as a means of transportation regardless of its favourable attributes. Research at the Environmental Institute in California shows that 27% of the carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere,
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the
air
quality of numerous countries
what
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airlines are responsible for.
This
immense amount of toxic chemical substances emitted into the
air
is what needs to be considered more than famine and crop losses. In short, it seems to me that it would be better to invest and
further
develop food transportation services by
air
for
people
's daily necessities.
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