Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it is a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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A section of individuals believe that moving
food
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by aircraft is an excellent idea and it should increase as
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without similar opinion and the writer that absolutely agree with the first statement will explain
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. It can be seen that many
people
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really want to eat fruits or desserts with their countries hardly
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up or out of
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season. The main cause is transporting it by
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can make it
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when was reached by costumers
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arriving in lack of time.
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, if you settle down in Vietnam and want to eat cherry, you should wait at the supermarkets
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the day the markets have it. To
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with,
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minority of
people
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do not think so, they think the farmers transport the native fruit that
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of
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to
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other cities or countries to make a profit. It can be understood that we sell native
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to other places and make it like a strange thing so foreigners want to try it and
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we sell it
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the
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higher cost than ever. More
people
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try to eat it, more profit to the salesman because abroad
people
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can not know about the real value of
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thing. Absolutely, it is
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selfish thinking and because they do not want to share anyone with their traditional
food
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to keep it
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or more special that nobody can know exactly about it. To my mind, travelling
food
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by aircraft is a clever decision because we can keep it fresh
to
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so
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abroad
people
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can feel
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special and spectacular of its smell and taste.
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that, using
plane
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a plane
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can get fruits or vegetables to anywhere
that is
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a long way or a short distance in
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short time. I have no idea about a section of
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the community
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community’
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community
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thinking that
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not agree with
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valid view.
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, aircraft is one of the most modern in the model or its useful.
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, I agree with
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opinion
support to use
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plane
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planes
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to transport native
food
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t
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to
foreign countries to recommend
about
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apply
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our country to
another ones
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because of their range of
benefit
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benefits
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.
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