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n many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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It cannot be denied that crime shows on TV or read in Books and
novels
 become more popular in many countries nowadays for several reasons .In
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 popular When you feel bored and inactive
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 criminal movie will lead you to increase
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 of adrenaline and entertainment
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detective
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 Conan series Will develop your critical thinking skills to solve the cases and
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 Thrill and suspense. Another example
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 famous
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 her mysteries and
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detective
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, everyone reads her
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and has
 an opportunity to analyse justice systems. In spite of the advantages of
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criminals
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 programs, my opinion is that
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criminal shows
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violence
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 behaviour
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a
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society ,Particularly
Children
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 In conclusion ,there is no doubt that
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crime
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 and TV crime
drama
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 have advantages and limitations on society and people.
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