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In some countries,more and more people are becoming interested in finding about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is an increase in the interest of many individuals in knowing more about the past
information
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 of the
house
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 they live in,and
this
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 can be
due to
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 reasons
such
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 as fraud, illegal ownership of the
house
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 and
people
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 can get access to
information
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 about the
house
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 they reside in through databases and
information
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 from
people
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 who have lived for a very long time in their neighbourhood.
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 with, Illegal ownership of houses
are
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 now very common and
they
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it
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result
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results
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into
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in
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 issues
such
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 as having to move away unexpectedly or even
in
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an inevitable quit notice.
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, in recent times,I had to move out of a rented apartment within
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short notice because I didn't get the apartment through the rightful owner and it resulted
into
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 a conflict, which led to moving into another
house
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 without a refund of my paid rent.
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, as fraud is
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 rampant these days,many
people
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 have fallen
victims
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 because fraudsters give out houses to
people
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 at a very affordable price as
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bait to trick them,and in most cases,they get to realise they have been scammed late.
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,
people
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 get access to
history
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the history
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 of the buildings they live in via databases which
shows
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show
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 the number of
people
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 that have lived in a
house
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, how long the
house
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 has been built and other
information
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 they need.
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, they can approach neighbours who have been living around for a long time to get
information
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 concerning the
house
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 they live in.
For instance
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, recently there was a viral video which showed how a lady got
information
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 about a
house
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 she recently moved into through a
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 interview with the community leaders and she was able to get relevant
information
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 concerning it. In conclusion, Fraud and cases of illegal ownership of houses are reasons why more
people
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 are interested in finding out about the history of the
house
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 they live in, which can be through databases and inquiring from nearby neighbours in the community.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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