Government spending on restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree?
Rather than choosing to spend tax-paying money for the development of the nation's infrastructure, many governments from around the country spend on historical buildings in cities.
Although
the decision might seem unfair, the sake of its city resident's safety, Linking Words
as well as
the tourist factor are all the reasons why I believe it should be considered Linking Words
as
the right decision Change preposition
apply
instead
of the previous criticism
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First,
it is inevitable that any kind of building from any country can undergo corrosion. Linking Words
As a result
, without proper maintenance, part of a building can fall apart which endangers everyone near it. Linking Words
For example
, in Vietnam, there was a France colonized era cathedral located in Ho Chi Minh City which had been damaged over time, if the government hadn't decided to hire an expert who could help to repair the church, given that the surrounding area was a highly populated area, many residents' life would have been at risk. Linking Words
Hence
it is vital for the maintenance process to ensure the safety of the surrounding area
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Additionally
, for the most part, historical remains are one of the most important tourist attractions. Since the purpose of tourism is immersing the visited country history's and visiting old buildings is one in many ways. Linking Words
Subsequently
, keeping its beauty over time is not a wrongdoing. Linking Words
For instance
, when first mentioning Japan, they would think of its old castle Linking Words
as well as
its historical palace.
In conclusion, even though there are growing demand for better infrastructure in cities, the restoration of old remains may seem unfair, Linking Words
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this
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also
helps its residents in many ways. Not only for safety purposes but Linking Words
also
to nurture cities’ tourism as well.Linking Words
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