The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year

The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year
Contained in the bar chart is data pertaining to the preference of the youngster's transport in 4 nations.
Overall
, the car was the most popular transport in every country, with the exception of
Germany
.
Additionally
, cycling is a popular transportation option in Great Britain,
Germany
and
France
, but less preferred in the USA. Looking at the data more closely, it can be observed that
France
had the highest rates of bicycles at approximately 735. Next was in the UK and the USA had the same point at 60%
while
car in
Germany
was less than bicycle in the same country at 40% and more than 42%, respectively Moving on to those who opted for motorcycles, the United States was the sole nation where young individuals favoured
this
mode of transportation, accounting for precisely 30%. In the other countries, the percentage ranged from 10% to approximately 15%.
By contrast
, the bicycle was more popular in
France
, Great Britain, and
Germany
, it can be noticed that
Germany
had the highest rate at 42.
However
, the UK and
France
recorded higher figures at 30% and 15% and the USA was the lowest at 10%.
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  • bar chart
  • transport preferences
  • young people
  • countries
  • specific year
  • most popular
  • mode of transport
  • car
  • public transport
  • cycling
  • walking
  • significant variations
  • preferred
  • least favored
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