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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspaper. What are the reasons for this? What are the reasons for this? What would be done to solve the problem?

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Recycling materials,
such
 as glass, plastic and cartons, is
an
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 practice that helps to reduce our impact on the environment. Many
people
 across the world,
however
, do not recycle their waste and send everything to landfill. In my opinion, lack of awareness and inconvenience are the primary reasons for
this
 problem.
However
,
conduction
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 campaign and
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. The reasons for the lack of recycling seem to be quite simple. In a number of countries official recycling programmes either do not exist, or they are relatively new.
People
,
therefore
, are generally unaware of the importance of recycling their refuse. Being used to seeing all the rubbish going to the same
bin
, they simply continue to do the same, without putting too much thought into it. Even those who understand the
environment
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 benefits of recycling may
be still be
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 unwilling to inconvenience themselves with sorting their waste. After all, in order to recycle something as simple as a plastic bottle or one
newspapers
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, one
need
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 to keep a separate
bin
 at
home
 or find a public recycling dustbin when outside To encourage
people
 to recycle more, a comprehensive public campaign is required. A good start would be to explain to
people
 what economic and environmental benefits recycling can provide.
This
 can be done via flyers delivered to each
home
 and advertising on television.
The next step is
 to make recycling as easy as possible. (explanation) On the streets, recycling bins should be located next to each general rubbish
bin
.
Home
 recycling should be facilitated by various means,
such
 as arranging frequent collections and providing
people
 with free recycling
bin
 bags.
To conclude
, it is the lack of awareness about the benefits of recycling and reluctance for
people
 to sort their refuse, that prevents them from engaging with
this
 useful practice. (Solution) When they fully understand its advantages and can recycle their rubbish at
home
 and outside easily and quickly. I believe that many will choose to do the right thing.
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