The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Entertainment is one of the most important aspects of people since

time

immemorial. In

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modern era, there are plenty of ways to get entertained. It is often said that

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the

violence

in the

movies

and

telivision

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television

shows

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influencing

crime

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rate in

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society.

Therefore

, authorities should take

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to reduce it. In my opinion,

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partially agree with

this

statement

due to

several reasons.

Movies

and

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Television

shows are undoubtedly playing a key role in terms of entertainment.

Firstly

,

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there are many other

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of free

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activities, a huge number of people always prefer to spend on those gadgets. Because it is not just

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also

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vast area of knowledge.

Secondly

, many

telivision

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television

programs have been producing meaningful

content

, which positively

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the

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children.

For instance

, there is a TV show named Mahabharat in India,

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children

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attention in terms of its

content

, which they are educated about the ancient Indian culture through animation.

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thinks about

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time

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, he or she most probably

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to watch a movie.

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society

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negatively affected by films

as well as

TV shows.

Initially

,

violence

coupled with

vulgar greatly influential to its audience, especially the young ones.

As a result

, in many cases, teenagers try to imitate the same to the public as they saw in the

movies

.

Thus

, there should be

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proper scrutiny

about

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any kind of

movies

or TV shows from the side of authorities.

For example

,

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broadcast department only

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video output, if it

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not

included

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violence

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content

.

In addition

, they must encourage film creators who well-known in terms of their past creations In conclusion,

although

audience

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can be influenced by

violence

included in the

movies

and

telivision

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television

shows, it just cannot be banned. I would argue that

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only governments are able to

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the

content

and if it is harmful, those shows should

ban

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.