The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. 

Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graph displays details on the visits of foreign tourists in North
America
,Central and Eastern Europe,South East Asia,
sub-saharan
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Africa and South
America
from 1990 to 2005.The unit is measured in millions.
Overall
,it is evident that there was an upward trend in all countries over the years.
To begin
with, In 1990, North
America
stood at 70,
while
Europe was at 30.They both saw a rapid increase in the following years
,
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and clashed at 90
at the end
of the period being the highest amongst all nations.
Also
,There was a significant surge, as the figure rose from 20 to 50 in North
America
by 2005.
Finally
,there was a similar pattern between Sub
haran
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Saharan
Africa and South
America
as they had an equivalent figure of about 15 between 1990 and 1995,
then
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Africa increased slightly over the years and was 20 in 2005
although
South
America
was just underneath and was nearly 19 being the least by 2005.
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  • international tourist arrivals
  • insight
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuation
  • statistic
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • surge
  • data point
  • comparative
  • quantitative analysis
  • economic factor
  • political stability
  • tourism sector
  • global event
  • destination popularity
  • benchmark
  • year-on-year change
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