In many professional sports, there is an increase in the numbers of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions.
There is an increasing number of
athletes
who compete at the professional Level
that use illegal Fix capitalization
level
substances
affecting their performance. This
may be caused by the lack of knowledge
of sport
performers. Change the noun form
sports
Therefore
in this
essay
I will point out the importance of nutritionists Add a comma
essay,
to be
involved at the professional level of Change the verb form
being
Correct article usage
the sport
sport
business.
Change the noun form
sports
To begin
with, many athletes
are not well informed or have round knowledge
about specific chemicals in the supplements they consume. In many cases, supplement products experiment by making a new mix of sport
drinks or foods, adding extra ingredients without specifying their nutrition facts. Change the noun form
sports
On the other hand
, information about banned specific substances
does not include information about brands. We can see this
in the case of steroids that
are broken down into smaller chemicals called protein acid and mixed with some sports coffee brands that not many sports enthusiasts are aware of. Correct pronoun usage
which
This
gap of information makes individual athletes
unable to catch up with the rules that govern their consumption that
in the long Correct word choice
and
run
those banned Add a comma
run,
substances
are already entering their body
and affecting their performance.
Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
Furthermore
, we need professional nutritionists to be involved in high level
sportsmanship. Since they have round Add a hyphen
high-level
knowledge
in the field of consumed substances
, they can gave
professional Change the verb form
give
advices
about specific chemicals that Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
athletes
should not consumed
, Change the verb form
consume
moreover
they have Add a comma
moreover,
knowledge
about how to consume any beverages on
a better way Change preposition
in
such
as best
time to drink coffee, how to maximize caloric intake of an individual so that can boost the Correct article usage
the best
athletes
performance. Their involvement will shed light Change to a genitive case
athlete's
athletes'
to
many sport-performers about their consumption so Change preposition
on
athletes
can focus on their game and physical training.
In conclusion, as the legendary martial art
master, Bruce Fix the agreement mistake
arts
Capitalize word
Lee
lee
, coined, ‘Capitalize word
Lee
Capitalize word
We
we
are what we eat’, We, especially Capitalize word
We
athletes
, have to be aware of what Correct pronoun usage
we
they
consume as our daily performances are determined by Correct pronoun usage
we
Correct article usage
the substances
substances
that we intake. Correct article usage
the substances
Therefore
we must value the advice of a professional nutritionist and incorporate their knowledge
into the athlete’s daily and professional’s
life.Change noun form
professional
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